A Deal With The Devil

A Deal With The Devil

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Karlah. By strawberrylips14 Updated Nov 24

Are you willing to take the risk in the name of love? 

Love is like a gambling game. You have to take the risk even you don't know what the consequences will be if you lose. Even if you can't afford to lose... 

Are you going to enter in the game?

Meet Isabella who foolishly loved Simon to the tiniest bits. However, she fell into a devil. Her love was so strong to follow his wishes without wasting any minute. But he is a devil. He's ruthless and cruel and proud. 

She don't know why she fell in love. But it all started with..... 

A Deal With The Devil.

blare_lina blare_lina Jun 02
It was interesting. By title, I thought it was going to be supernatural one but now I don't think so. Lol. No worries though. I don't brag about the grammar as nobody can actually have perfection in that. Apart from that I liked it. Keep writing :) *
this_is_her this_is_her Jun 02
The plot is good. The only problem is grammar and punctuation which you could edit over time. But on the whole you did a good job. 😊
parrot1234 parrot1234 May 23
You really did a good job on explaining isabellas financial situation, but the accidentally bumping into the guy scene is common and a bit cliche.
the story is interesting. Simon looks like a monster or something hahahaha!
RubyZamba RubyZamba 4 days ago
hello compliment of the season to you . i'm ruby by name 
                              could you please i write me at rubbyzamba1993@hotmail.com
                              am very interested in stories , but am not often here
*there's po hehehe. 'Their' is used as a possesive pronoun :)