The Seductive Eyes Of a Murderer

The Seductive Eyes Of a Murderer

11K Reads 107 Votes 16 Part Story
GG By Novelist Updated Apr 01, 2012

She has the body of a goddess and eyes that can seduce the strongest man. With her you wouldn't know whether to moan out of want, or scream out of fear. Her poor victims don't suspect a thing, she betrays no emotions. How can you find the instinct to sense danger when her eyes call you and will you to submit to her every wanting? She's dangerous. The worst part is...I wouldn't love her any other way.

  • adventure
  • breakfast
  • chapter
  • cool
  • danger
  • david
  • ending
  • escaping
  • eyes
  • funny
  • girl
  • girls
  • guns
  • guy
  • humor
  • hurt
  • kidnapped
  • killing
  • lakes
  • last
  • love
  • murder
  • murderer
  • mysterious
  • mystic
  • pimp
  • plot
  • pretty
  • rivers
  • romantic
  • sadomasochistic
  • seductive
  • shooting
  • sniper
  • training
  • violence
  • vulture
hugskissesx2 hugskissesx2 Apr 01, 2012
I love it! The writing has a few funny lines in it and its different from what I've read on here.
                              Off to Chapter 2 ♥
JamezMichael JamezMichael Mar 31, 2012
Alright so after reading this I have a few suggestiong, try writing your story in Microsoft Word so you get the nice formating. You use a great amount of detail and your writing flow is amazing!
Mariah_EJ Mariah_EJ Mar 31, 2012
Lol,Kick my out of your house and I'll go to someone else's. Thats funny.
kissesNhugs4u kissesNhugs4u Jan 07, 2012
I really like what is going on here! There is a writing style you have that makes this story come alive! I like what is happening to this story. I can't see why it is rated R. It doesn't seem to be that why. I love it so far though and its only the First Chap.
                              *now off to chapter 2 <3 *
staceyy97 staceyy97 Jul 10, 2011
Love the plot, characters and your style of writing! This is really good!! :D
                              
                              *Voted*
Damonfan101 Damonfan101 Jun 14, 2011
I love this story! very well written, barely any grammar mistakes, the story caught my attention, loved it!
                              update soon ! :D