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Brotherly Love

Brotherly Love

15.4K Reads 399 Votes 5 Part Story
Monet Brown By Inspirella Updated Aug 13, 2013

"You know you're a dumb blonde, right Autumn?"                                                        "You're such a freaking child, Avery."
"You know you repeat yourself, right Autumn?"
"I hate you."
"I hate you more. Aren't we great siblings?"
     Autumn Johnson wanted nothing more than to have her brother, Avery Johnson, out her life. Avery had gotten Autumn into trouble thousands of times, pulled mean pranks on her, and just down right got on her last nerve. They could barely have a conversation without having an argument, and it was starting to get annoying when they fought.
     Just when Autumn is ready to tell Avery off, some unwanted words slip after an "accident", changing everything they thought they knew about each other. Autumn can't understand her emotions, or why she can never look at her brother without blushing.
     Autumn is crazy worried about herself, especially when she's caught in an evil love scandal.
     Read about Autumn and her weird, maybe a little twisted mind, as she brings a whole new definition to brotherly love.

[This is the revision of "Brotherly Love...?"]

Why do I have a feeling that this Ash is Ash Ketchum from Pokemon????  I kno I am ridiculous. XD
Arraxus Arraxus Jul 01, 2016
But I think there was just enough drama...there shouldn't be too much in the beginning-middle... you want it to be light and airy with a touch of romance and drama.
steamydil steamydil Oct 05, 2016
Imma be honest... that's a little creepy. May not be true, but still creepy
fhulu1 fhulu1 Feb 06
You concise the story very well, lets see what the cruxes of the next chapter  hold.
fhulu1 fhulu1 Feb 04
tell him exactly what you  called him, if no, its does matter he already heared it.
You got that one wrong. Harry Potter was the boy who lived and Voldemort is the one who shouldn't be named