Milani Jensen is a 17 yr old girl from England who's world is turned upside down when she goes on an exchange program to Australia.
Good:) now for my constructive criticism... Not much! Just add descriptions to pull the action together so it will b very enjoyable and I also agree with littlemegraciee anyways voted
This was a sweet little story, but you should have better spacing with the dialogue xD
Other than that, it was good! You should try and make it into a proper, novel sized book! That would be really interesting!
I really liked reading this, although as Booperkat pointed out, there are mistakes with the spacing.
I also thought that it was a bit fast paced.
Other than that I loved it :)
@Booperkat Thanks for reading it and for the review :) Oh I didn't even see that when I was editing. I do plan on continuing it but I wanted to end it so that it can be read by itself or as one part of the big story. I'll keep working at it. Thanks again :)