Neighbors with the Bad Boy (In Editing And Reconstruction)

Neighbors with the Bad Boy (In Editing And Reconstruction)

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brianna By BriannaT000 Completed

I wasn't different; I was like every other teenage girl at school. I didn't resist the bad boy, the bad-boy didn't resist me. We fell for each other—just like every other bad boy and good girl cliche. But, the thing was, I wasn't necessarily a good girl and he wasn't necessarily a bad boy. We disagreed (and thoroughly) when acknowledging different subjects, that was for sure, but we weren't exactly polar opposites.

l_lahey l_lahey Mar 30
FTR
                              March 31 2017
                              12:40 AM 
                              supposed to be turning in all missing work
AnyaStump3 AnyaStump3 Aug 31
This paragraph does amazingly at drawing a reader in. You were very descriptive from the start, and that's awesome! But be careful using the same word over an over. Inwardly and sighed were both used twice within one paragraph. Made the whole thing seem repetitive.
Dang it I just read the sequel to the bad boys saw me naked I don't need characters with this name right now
My bffs name is mike lol 
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Why am I a loser
AnyaStump3 AnyaStump3 Aug 31
Again. You're clearly a talented writer. But you mentioned two years three times within three sentences. Its very redundant and uneccesary. If you were to only mention it once it would make for a smoother read.
hattanajs hattanajs Feb 08
If you like these kind of stories read my sister's! Follow @itsQueenNicole and "Bad boy Neighbor" is the story!