Millennium Lovers

Millennium Lovers

36.7K Reads 1.3K Votes 47 Part Story
Cathy By -Arashi_ Updated Jan 10

Atem x reader
Y/n was a slave. Sold by her parents to the palace so her older brother, Marik, would focus more on becoming a tomb keeper, instead of playing and taking care of his sister Y/n. When she got to the palace, y/n met the pharaoh, Atem. She became friends, but as they got older she began to fall farther in love with the soon to be Pharaoh. I suck at descriptions don't mind me. DO NOT OWN YUGIOH OR ANYTHING RELATED. ALL I OWN IS MY OC IF I PUT HER IN THIS. Enjoy my duelist's <3

Atem925 Atem925 Nov 15, 2016
Fron what's here on the first page, it looks really interesting so far.
ZoeSmith663 ZoeSmith663 Sep 15, 2016
Hey just a little heads up, the quotation marks go before and after the dialogue.
                              
                              Ex: "Don't we all?" Odion said smiling, before pecking your head and walking out of the room.
                              
                              Just a friendly remark.
Sora_Ashley Sora_Ashley Jun 30, 2016
I hate to be a grammar nazi but the structure of the book is a little off, I like the story but it could do with a little fixing
WinterWoodsTrash WinterWoodsTrash Nov 21, 2016
The only thing that is wrong is where you put your quotation marks, but its still good
MikaExcaliber MikaExcaliber Aug 07, 2016
The first thing I thought of was I read the description....... 
                              Slavemas