Millennium Lovers

Millennium Lovers

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"yes.........master"-Sebastian By -Arashi_ Updated Oct 24

Atem x reader
Y/n was a slave. Sold by her parents to the palace so her older brother, Marik, would focus more on becoming a tomb keeper, instead of playing and taking care of his sister Y/n. When she got to the palace, y/n met the pharaoh, Atem. She became friends, but as they got older she began to fall farther in love with the soon to be Pharaoh. I suck at descriptions don't mind me. DO NOT OWN YUGIOH OR ANYTHING RELATED. ALL I OWN IS MY OC IF I PUT HER IN THIS. Enjoy my duelist's <3

Atem925 Atem925 Nov 15
Fron what's here on the first page, it looks really interesting so far.
ZoeSmith663 ZoeSmith663 Sep 15
Hey just a little heads up, the quotation marks go before and after the dialogue.
                              
                              Ex: "Don't we all?" Odion said smiling, before pecking your head and walking out of the room.
                              
                              Just a friendly remark.
Sora_Ashley Sora_Ashley Jun 30
I hate to be a grammar nazi but the structure of the book is a little off, I like the story but it could do with a little fixing
The only thing that is wrong is where you put your quotation marks, but its still good
The first thing I thought of was I read the description....... 
                              Slavemas