Slut*Phan

Slut*Phan

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CryBaby By Emblem3_phan Completed

Phil Lester was only 14 years old his mom and dad sold him to prostitution
He was now 18 he was younger then everyone else who were in there 20 or 30s one day someone decided to buy him 
Dan Howell was small when his family became known to be one of the richest families in the word he was 21 when his family left him for being gay but still leaving him all the money he was now 25 but he didn't want to be lonely so why not buy someone

Wait does this mean Dan tops in this one.. cause if so *cringe*
" my name is dan howell and from now on every night I will go all 50 shades of gray on your ass. You okay with that?"
I want to continue reading but the punctuation is so poorly written I don't know if I can omg.
oh my goodness no punctuation pls help flowing sentences confused
Some constructive critism: Your sentences are really long, some advice would be to use more commas and things like that or split them up.
"My name is Dan Howell/Phil Lester" when u read that u know sh!ts  about to go down. Y'know what I mean ;')