The Sword of Wisimir

The Sword of Wisimir

45.5K Reads 3K Votes 41 Part Story
Allen Stroud By AllenStroud Completed

Opportunistic thief, Jack Von Drey thinks his luck is in when he steals the Governor's taxes from the back of a treasury wagon. But it turns out, this is a game with higher stakes than he bargained for. 

City Minister, Urin Braymes makes one bad decision. Unfortunately for him, it opens him up to being blackmailed for the rest of his life. 

Magister Leel's scheme to recapture his position of power seems to be right on track. But, when he makes a bargain, he finds he has unleashed magic that even a wizard cannot control. 

And Jarno Herren? Well he just wants to find out the truth. 

The Sword of Wisimir is a fantasy tale of crime, intrigue, life and death. Where ideals are cheap and, in the end, everyone finds out what they'd sacrifice to survive...

Available to purchase here: 
 
http://amzn.to/Xp4bRW - Ebook (UK).
http://amzn.to/R1Jopi - Ebook (US). 
http://amzn.to/1TfVeuK - Paperback (UK).

Shattered_Blades Shattered_Blades Aug 16, 2016
This book looks enthralling already, and this is only the first part!
- - Aug 10, 2016
This is getting more and more interesting....I feel sorry for Urin, and only partly because of his name XD I can't read it without sniggering. The magician seems like someone I'd never want to cross. Great writing!
marjalilli marjalilli Apr 08, 2016
"Stood on the faces of their victims". I like that line 👍👏
Daipsycho Daipsycho Aug 19, 2016
Terrific beginning - you could feel the bustle of the city in the first chapter, and Leel is like apathy incarnate. 
                              
                              I could genuinely feel queasy reading the interrogation scene, so well done! 
                              
                              I'm sure more loose ends need tying up, and unfortunately for our MC, I suspect...
- - Aug 10, 2016
I love stories that start with action, your imagery is stunning and it's amazing how your words flow so well. You capture the atmosphere and the character's voices perfectly! A really well-written chapter, off to see what happens next now :D
linahanson linahanson Aug 18, 2016
Is this already on the Adventure Community's reading list? If not, it should be. Loved the action, the touch of humour and the lifeliness of it all. This is highly professional, and WP should be proud to have you