I Tried

I Tried

3.7M Reads 63.9K Votes 40 Part Story
alex <3 By alex_t11 Completed

What happens when a girl finally runs away from her abusive past to be free only to run into her mate? And her mate just happens to be an alpha...of the strongest pack in the world. What happens when her abusive past comes to haunt her? Before she had no one, but what about now?



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This book is now under the user @sarcastic_rose if you would like to read it please go to her, this story is no longer being created by me

I had a draft of a book and the main was called Avery Thompson, based off my friend, damn now I'm going to have to change it
JTCharles JTCharles Nov 03, 2014
Ingesting start. I would've remove the hi though, it ruins the impact. It should've read "My name is Avery Thompson and this is my tragic story." Otherwise, good start.
Always_in_the_way Always_in_the_way Sep 30, 2014
Am I the only one who realized that she's 18 instead of the stereo typical 16
SingForTheMomentxx SingForTheMomentxx Sep 22, 2014
y it no working it said it had 33 chappies but it only has one?? :'(
-Emilia -Emilia Sep 22, 2014
That last sentence kind of ruined it, see it as critic and only that.
KarenHaskell KarenHaskell Sep 19, 2014
just saying I think it would be better if you did : My name is Avery Thomas. This is my story.  but if you want to keep it like that tho. it sounds good like that to.