A Family Perfected

A Family Perfected

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Kelsey Turcotte By kc1tubbol Updated Jun 14

Who are you?" I whispered through my sobs. 
I felt him loom over me and his hot breath shot in my ear, sending shivers down my spine. 
"Call me Father," he smiled. 
My heart shattered at his words. 


 Vivian Love was counting on finally having the best birthday she's ever had. It was her sixteenth birthday and she was to celebrate with her closest friends, and maybe even talk to the cute guy from math class. What she wasn't counting on was being abducted by a delusional man, being hauled off to an old house in the middle of nowhere and being forced to play house. Vivian must hold onto whatever shred of hope she has left if she wants to make it out of this game alive with the help of the others imprisoned with her.

Hope he get get boogers when he was kissing  her mouth  and nose, sorry that's disgusting  I know, great  read  so far
Spinoyx Spinoyx Jul 25
Uh oh. She promised her friends she'd be back. That's where you messed up, girl.
This is so much better, not perfect, but nothing's perfect! :) I look forward to reading the rewritten version! :) :) ;:)
Is this the same as the 1st book just rewritten because I'm confused