Captive in Plain Sight

Captive in Plain Sight

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S.A.Henley By sahenley Updated Aug 05, 2016

Mila Black is the prisoner of a control freak with bad intentions. After a traumatic incident almost ruins her life, she's started over in Seattle with a new job and her first serious relationship. But everything is poised to crumble when she becomes the prisoner of Alec Laurent, a controlling psychopath set to push her limits. As she tries to keep her loved ones from danger and stay a step ahead of her captor, she realizes there's more to their relationship than he's letting on. The key to her freedom is finding out exactly what it is.

Ranked: #1 Mystery/Thriller 5.24.16

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Her heart skipped a beat when she saw it. High-definition surveillance footage played on the television.

Her mother talking on the phone in the grocery checkout.

Her brother playing video games with friends.

Her best friend driving her car.

Her boyfriend commuting on the bus to work.

Her dad playing basketball at the gym.

She dropped the vase shattering what was left,  putting her hand to her mouth in absolute horror.

"Sit down, Ms. Black," Alec said. "We have a lot to cover."

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Ourbrokenworld Ourbrokenworld May 20, 2016
You live in Seattle? I could tell. I've been there a few time. My ex lives there. I wish I could go to Canada! Hope you had fun! :D
Autodidact90 Autodidact90 Apr 19, 2016
Intriguing so far. It is amazing that I don't think I seen any errors. Most people have them and it bugs me. Good job.
Sanchez_reader Sanchez_reader May 16, 2016
I've been waiting for what seems like forever 😩 !! Very very good book , keep it up !
xSweetxSorrowx xSweetxSorrowx May 31, 2016
Ok so I'm so into your story. I can't wait to read more yet it is so annoying cause I am soooo impatient some times hahahahahaha hope you update sooner than later
sahenley sahenley Apr 19, 2016
Thanks Carson! It pretty much inspired me to write the story.
zahera37 zahera37 May 15, 2016
Hi ! Good to hear
                              Was getting a little worried ... 
                               Looking forward to next chapter. 
                              Take care.