Surreal and My Everything
Lol.....one thought, if u r lying wrapped in the arms of your beloved, why are ya feeling suffocated? [wink]
good sh*t man
really good sh*t xD
this is not really my typ of poem so i can't really relate to it but teastes are different so that really has nothing to say
it is still good =)
this is really good i love how all the things you wirte are emotional and its not sh*t at all its great
wow reading that i painted a picture in my mind that went exactly with this poem
or as you you call it sh*t but i dont think so
well this sh*t is getting you a new fan!
Ha you're sh*t is perfectly awesome!
You get my good sh*t vote!
@whyteoleander there are no rules stating that all poetry must rhyme, you are looking for a nursery rhyme book if thats all you are looking for dear.