When I Fall (ON GOING)

When I Fall (ON GOING)

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Denise♛ By otakugreen Updated 4 days ago

Serenade Ann Flores is a studious girl. She has an average family, she loves her little sister, she's pretty and friendly and she's happy with her life. To top it all, she's almost perfect. On the other side, Sean Clark Mendez is your boy next door. He loves music. Miyembro siya ng isang banda, he's also a model, he has a cool and supportive brother.

There lives are almost perfect right? Almost. They used to be friends. He used to court her. They had a past. Muli silang nagkita when they go to college but everything changed. He changed. He became cold. Maari pa kayang mabalik ang dati? Maging magkaibigan pa kaya ulit sila? Or more than that?


#541 in teenfiction

JazzmynElva JazzmynElva Nov 07
 #LBC 
                              
                              I missed my school days on this part. Andyan ang kopyahan tuwing exams pero wag papahuli. Andyan din ang mga kalokohan madalas sinusuway ang mga house rules ng eskwelahan ganun pa rin ang peg wag pa ring papahuli. Nice start so far
sircoolnoor sircoolnoor Nov 11
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                              Same kami ng bida, I only stayed at my house during vacation but if my inner soul wanted to travel, i'll go. Natawa ako sa school name nila, 'ANU' hahaha. ANU? ANU DAW? Ang cool ng canteen nila hah!!
JazzmynElva JazzmynElva Nov 06
 #LBC 
                              
                              Yung ibang first letters ng mga proper nouns hindi naka-capitalized saka yung mga english word at mga tagalog words na nagsisimula sa vowel ang 1st letter dapat may nilalagay kang dash para mapaghiwalay mo sila imbes na space.
JazzmynElva JazzmynElva Nov 06
 #LBC 
                              
                              I missed my school days on this part. Andyan ang kopyahan tuwing exams pero wag papahuli. Andyan din ang mga kalokohan madalas sinusuway ang mga house rules ng eskwelahan ganun pa rin ang peg wag pa ring papahuli. Wala pa naman akong nakikitang typos. Nice start so far
sircoolnoor sircoolnoor Nov 11
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                              Good start po. Kahit for me, ganto ang mga prologue na nababasa ko, may uniqueness pa rin ito. Maganda naman po. So far so good. Nice start po!.