Another Chance

Another Chance

46 Reads 0 Votes 1 Part Story
SmooAngel By SmooAngel Completed

When a young man loses everything that gave him the will to live, he finds that not everything we lose is lost

Honeydewchunkums Honeydewchunkums Nov 03, 2011
A good little story that definitely pulled at the heartstrings. There was a few grammatical errors, but none that interrupted the flow of the story. Keep up the good work and have a fantastic day!
SmooAngel SmooAngel Nov 02, 2011
@inspired123 Thanks for the comment and the info, I will work on that, and sure thing
inspired123 inspired123 Nov 02, 2011
This is a well stuctured piece of writting,and I liked it.However I found the start somewhat boring,and it didnt excatly grab