When a young man loses everything that gave him the will to live, he finds that not everything we lose is lost
A good little story that definitely pulled at the heartstrings. There was a few grammatical errors, but none that interrupted the flow of the story. Keep up the good work and have a fantastic day!
@inspired123 Thanks for the comment and the info, I will work on that, and sure thing
This is a well stuctured piece of writting,and I liked it.However I found the start somewhat boring,and it didnt excatly grab