The Soul of Love  #Wattys2017

The Soul of Love #Wattys2017

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E.X.  Alexander By EXAlexander Updated Jun 16

Eros, primordial god of love, has been hiding in plain sight since the primordialomachy. He and the gods of old have been biding their time, assuming the identities of gods of the Greek pantheon, waiting for the time when they will rise again and take back what was stolen from them. For eons, Eros has been looking for his lost soulmate, her return marks the beginning of end of the Olympians and the return of the primordial gods. But Eros' soulmate is reborn a mortal, with no memory of Eros.
                          
                          
                     "Psyche, make your choice now. I only have so much control and I have waited so long for you that I cannot continue to let you touch me without taking you. So choose, do I stay or do I go?"
                          
                  Psyche stilled at his words. Feeling that something fragile and precious would be lost if she allowed him to leave this night she made her decision.   "Stay."
                          
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                      If you enjoy The Soul of Love, check out its prequel, The Wind and the Flower.  It tells the love story of Zephyrus and Khloris.

Maplejay Maplejay Apr 26
I feel like this is implying that the snake became... his snake... But that'd be a little odd so I'll stop now
Your language, the words you use, the grammar. I don't know why anybody won't be hooked from the prologue itself. The prologue holds promise.
And no, I didn't think that the prologue was too long. It was perfect. But then I'm just 18 so I might be wrong.
-Farah -Farah Jul 24
I love this so far. The writing is so good, and the prologue is spot on.  I'm a greek myth fanatic and this speaks levels to me.
12345ahmad 12345ahmad Jun 15
I'm not even going to try to read this 
                              It's like a tongue twister 👅
vampirediaries101 vampirediaries101 Jul 11, 2016
Very interresting prologue and a unique and different look on greek mythology that i havent seen before