When Renee keeps telling Bella that she's an old soul, she has no idea how right she is. See, Bella really is an old soul. She keeps getting reincarnated everytime her body dies. So, where does Edward come in?
Great idea for a story.. I can't wait to chk it out.
I don't know anything about Immortals, either. I have read The Host, & so far, this seems a teeny bit similar (only so far), but I'm cool w/ that. That's why they call it fanfic. :)))) It sounds super interesting. Good for you!
Awese start to a stupendous story. A mash between The Immortals and Twilight. Love it!
It was ok, abit rushed, I liked how you started it but I have to agree with some of the others it's almost a copy of the immortals saga.
This reminds me of the host, but, it's really good so far. keep the Meyer saga alive!!!
@SerenaSnape you didn't offend me, I was just a bit hurt and surprised by your sarcasm! ;)
@jabeatty26 Don't worry, I'm not angry - I just asked a question. I'm curious, that's all.
@IsabelleRichardson I'm sorry if I insulted you - I didn't mean to.