DISCOVERING TOOTHBRUSH!!

DISCOVERING TOOTHBRUSH!!

822 Reads 10 Votes 6 Part Story
SAng By superspeed Updated Apr 01, 2011

Well.. this is the story of 3010 where things are so modern and full of technology. People don't brush their teeth in fact they got some device which is in their teeth which keeps it clean. But one day that device does not function well and then people are suffering from toothache- and bad breath and now they are looking for a way to end it. So they think of going to the past through the time machine and discover the thing that could prevent their teeth from getting roten up. So lets see how do they discover toothbrush and teach the people in the future how to use them.:)

ErenBajracharya ErenBajracharya Apr 02, 2013
1 of the most jpt story ever read !!!! 
                              But enjoyed it alot !! full of melodrama and what not!!! awesome story!!!
D-keeSherpa D-keeSherpa Nov 26, 2010
i really like dis story dis is one of the lengthiest story i read after snowhite n cinderella hehe lol i love da story it's lyk really different  
superspeed superspeed Nov 23, 2010
@NISCHALL haha hope to keep u entertained even more.. if i know how to go on with the story nd@SakuraUchiha thankyou very much :)
NISCHALL NISCHALL Nov 23, 2010
Haha ! Your story is unique ~~It has a  light and friendly air to it , and the first chapter is already interesting ! 
                              Can't wait to see how she acts in school ? Hahahaha ! :))
                              Keep writing ! You have great talent in you :>