Midnight's Wonders & Midnights Dreams

Midnight's Wonders & Midnights Dreams

1.6K Reads 39 Votes 9 Part Story
LadyForbidden By ForbiddenSoul Updated Jan 09, 2011

Where darkness holds its screams in a forbidden place, a world encircled a universe called Yasavolda. A girl named Elena comes to the world for a lot more than she bargains for. Unable to understand why she does not belong to the world, she seeks her answers... but her answers come to get her... get ready for an adventure that would soon unfold before your eyes...

ForbiddenSoul ForbiddenSoul Dec 06, 2010
@chairsniffa lol ty for reading it :) I'll do another edit of the story again after this week since hoildays start on thursday 
ForbiddenSoul ForbiddenSoul Nov 30, 2010
 @Nicamooch :D thanx
                              @ZamTron lol thanx :) I don't like char. coming out of no where, it tends to make the reader confused :/ lol
                              
                              I wonder if my other chapters are too over described... 
ZimBob ZimBob Nov 29, 2010
Like most of the people comment said, u over-described quite a bit. 
                              I enjoyed it though.
                              I like how u developed ur characters, they didnt just show up out of no where.
                              U eased into them, which i like.
                              Keep it up and hope u can read my story Immortal Legacy. 
Elyana Elyana Nov 25, 2010
@ForbiddenSoul Haha! No worries, it happens to me all the time. It's why I keep my chapters long after I write them so I can keep looking back and improving. : )
ForbiddenSoul ForbiddenSoul Nov 25, 2010
@Elyana Yeah I know xD my stories tend to give out the thinness impression which I will try to change as much as possiable :) 
                              I might have to do a rewrite afterwards (since i kinda don't like it)  but i'll keep it there until I got a better way of writing it xD 
ForbiddenSoul ForbiddenSoul Nov 24, 2010
@ComplexIsMoody xD yeah and naw thanx that gave me alot of hope and lol your story isn't stupid I'm addicted reading it o.o lol! (works on the next chapter)