Hot BusinessMan Series: Only You [COMPLETED]

Hot BusinessMan Series: Only You [COMPLETED]

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harmese20 By harmese20 Completed

[MAJOR EDITING] R-18: WARNING, This is content is not suitable for you! Please, read at your own risk. Do you want to meet him! A Hot BusinessMan #3rd, Terrence Ark Montecarlo, the third member of 8th Bachelor of tycoon.



*Be ready to find him and adore.


©harmese20

kukurukuku0 kukurukuku0 Jun 30
google translator sucks sweetheart. Sorry but it messed up your article
reihoo reihoo Sep 30
Okay naman tagalog mo. Tagalog nalang te. Parang abstract kasi English mo, hirap intindihin.
Ate, wag masyadong gumamit ng gerund or words with ING. Yung preposition niyo rin po. Please edit this story ASAP kasi po nakakawalang gana
bethovening bethovening Aug 02
Yeah you're right the grammar sucks, maybe you're using Google trans, but you can edit your works since konti lang naman yung aayusin ☺
Hindi naman po sa pang-iinsulto ate huh? pero ungrammatical po kayo ng sobra I mean minsan ungrammatical din ako pero ganito katindi. Next time, wag na lng po kayong mag-englis ✌
hyouena16LJ hyouena16LJ Nov 06
Although Im not a writer still I would like to tell you my opinion
                              maraming po kayong typos and wrong grammar
                              but still it does make sense,:-)