Slave or Love

Slave or Love

42 Part Story 146K Reads 715 Votes
RozaANDDimka By RozaANDDimka Updated Oct 11, 2012

Trying too just get through school and get over the tragedy of her mother dying Crystal goes through life going day to day trying not to break down and cry until she turns eighteen and goes out to celebrate by herself and finds herself in a tough situation and then again in an even tougher one. The big question on her mind is will she become the horrible vampires slave or lover?

RozaANDDimka RozaANDDimka Nov 26, 2012 05:48AM
@nkcouncil * to
                                    I'm sorry you feel that way thanks for trying it anyway it Is my first chapter though and I feel I have gotten better throughout the book and I haven't had time to go back through to edit. Thanks for the comment.
nkcouncil nkcouncil Nov 24, 2012 04:32PM
I tried ti read this, but the run on sentences and lack of punctuation drove me nuts. Sorry.
_MiaP_ _MiaP_ Jun 29, 2012 05:33PM
I like it needs some editing and a little more detail on her being at the house or where ever the vamp took other then that it was good!! Nothing bad said!! VOTED
FriendshipsGB FriendshipsGB Jun 21, 2012 12:47PM
keep going on this book i love it and can'nt wait for more to read of it
Aurora2468 Aurora2468 May 20, 2012 09:56AM
@CutieBoo22 thats a bit of a harsh comment dont you think? Just cause it seems the same dosent mean it is.
departed_soul departed_soul Sep 09, 2011 11:04PM
This story sounds alot like a story i read ages ago on quzilla.