Bella and the wolf pack

Bella and the wolf pack

16.8K Reads 709 Votes 14 Part Story
Vampwolfgirl By JessicaChambers881 Completed

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Need quptation marks when someone is talking. And clearer explanations
There are a lot of run on sentences but other then that its good
Needs better punctuation and details other than that its really good
AmberWiese AmberWiese Jul 10
How you should have put it was
                              "And on monday, I have a surprise for you"
Hahahahahahahaha 
                              
                              Are you faqing kidding me ?! best dad in the world?! Yeah sure stop being delusional!
divergentlove101 divergentlove101 Jun 05, 2016
There should really be quotation marks. And clearer explanations