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Bella and the wolf pack

Bella and the wolf pack

14.5K Reads 605 Votes 14 Part Story
Vampwolfgirl By JessicaChambers881 Completed

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Need quptation marks when someone is talking. And clearer explanations
There are a lot of run on sentences but other then that its good
Needs better punctuation and details other than that its really good
AmberWiese AmberWiese Jul 10
How you should have put it was
                              "And on monday, I have a surprise for you"
divergentlove101 divergentlove101 Jun 05, 2016
There should really be quotation marks. And clearer explanations
Potterheadsrule123 Potterheadsrule123 Dec 11, 2016
I would ask why you made Jessica a major bitch, but she was one in the movies too