Brutal Beginnings (Four's sister Divergent)  UNDER EDITING

Brutal Beginnings (Four's sister Divergent) UNDER EDITING

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lUcY •• By The_Ravenclaw_Girl Completed


You've all heard of Four? Tobias Eaton? Did you know he had a sister?

Louisa Eaton is a fierce individual, she isn't made for Abnegation life. Everyday she puts up with blinding pain, from someone who shouldn't deliver it. Her father.

Louisa grabs her chance and flees, leaving the whippings and beatings back in the plain grey stoned house she had to call home.

She makes quite an entrance to her new life, including meeting someone she hasn't seen in two years.

No copyright intended I don't own any of the songs or pictures included in this fan fiction I do not own any characters either apart from Louisa

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angel_Sinclair angel_Sinclair May 29, 2017
Listening to that song while reading this makes me cry cause my life was a lot like four and his father
angel_Sinclair angel_Sinclair May 29, 2017
Reading this whole listening to this song makes me want to cry cause my life was a lot like four and his dad
CharlieTheWizard CharlieTheWizard Jul 02, 2017
I like this better than the original actually. She has a beautiful voice and sings this in an amazing way
ultimate_fangirl4610 ultimate_fangirl4610 Jun 01, 2017
Ur all thinking it either Uriah of Zeke, but what if its some random kid that isn't important to the actual novels. Just a thought
- - Jan 03, 2017
Hey! I just found this book! I already read the other two in your fanfic series, and I was all like, where is the first one? But I finally found it! Yayyyyy
DauntlessCakeBaby DauntlessCakeBaby Mar 02, 2017
Wait! It is Uriah, because Zeke is passed initiation, and can't go to school anymore.