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Midnights

Midnights

5.8K Reads 102 Votes 13 Part Story
Duckie By runawayduck Updated Aug 14, 2011

Anna Lia is strange girl, with a strange power. She can see spirits. But one day she sees something she has never seen before, a wolf with purple eyes. Soon she finds herself swept away, running towards an adventure like none other. Join Anna Lia and the Wolf as they search for the Same Thing. 

Cover art by ih8m0r0nz at deviantart.com

runawayduck runawayduck Nov 25, 2010
@storytimebarbara thank you :) and i saw you added my story to your library! that makes me so glad! I'm so happy people are reading my story and liking it :D
runawayduck runawayduck Nov 25, 2010
@archleone its not realllllyy a poem. its just how the wolf thinks, but yes it is supposed to be poem-like. but no not an actually poem. and thanks for your nice comment
                              @forbiddensoul hahah! why does every say twilight?? i've never read the book before
ForbiddenSoul ForbiddenSoul Nov 25, 2010
I enjoyed your story, good starting got me hooked, just it keeps reminding me of twilight xD but other than that I would love to read more of it, so keep going!
AnInnocentBystander AnInnocentBystander Nov 25, 2010
I'm not sold on the story yet but this is a pretty good start. A lot of people here start their stories with original poems but only few get it right. Hopefully, this poem is an indication of what I can expect of the story. It's definitely compelling :)
ElizaTrue ElizaTrue Nov 25, 2010
i thought it was good. and i didn't think the bones sounded too much like a werewolf because of the spikes the grew on its back and his long twisted tail. and i agree with elijahwillis. anna lia has a nice ring, but you should pick on or the other.
ElijahWillis ElijahWillis Nov 24, 2010
like storyreader said, it might sound a bit werewolfish. Change the description about the bones to make it sound not like a werewolf.