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The Cause of All Her Problems

The Cause of All Her Problems

5.1K Reads 73 Votes 15 Part Story
Holly By Writingfornoreason Updated May 11, 2012

Madison and Max have been friends for years, so when Max stops talking to her, she knows that something's wrong. But when she confronts him, it doesn't have the desired effect. Soon, Madison is hurled into of world of vampires, werewolves and physchotic Alphas, and she quickly realises that she needs Max to get her through this. But will Max ever forgive her for what he sees as betrayal?

Noulenev Noulenev Jan 14, 2011
I like the concept... Who doenst love Were , vamps and many more things... But I like this story , good luck with the future , I support u
MillionLaughsAMinute MillionLaughsAMinute Nov 23, 2010
Okay, let's not make Caitlin the bitchy one in this friendship. And I think you should pay your editor...
DONGeee DONGeee Nov 23, 2010
I think that your story is good but you just need to put a bit more detail in. Instead of moving on to quickly explain each part clearly so the readers get more of an idea.