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Neglected Uzumaki (A Naruto Fanfiction).

Neglected Uzumaki (A Naruto Fanfiction).

40.3K Reads 1.4K Votes 20 Part Story
Saphia T. By saphiag Updated Apr 07

Naruto is neglected by his parents for his sister. One day after he is beaten and left for dead an anbu appears and trains him and maybe even love him as an older brother. 
(No Uchiha massacre)

ZachUzumaki ZachUzumaki Mar 13
2nd part, also good, but the text grammar and placing question marks help with the story as well (sorry again xD)
Never tasted Nutella. Is it basically chocolate peanut butter. If so I could tell why people like it.
BittyBean BittyBean Mar 07
God every time I read something that involves pocky my mind instantly goes into the gutters -_-
BittyBean BittyBean Mar 07
Tip for the future, try sticking to one tense(I.e. Past or present). It makes it a lot nicer to read 👍 
                              Past: "ok lets go." He said as he ran off.
                              Present: "ok let's go." He says as he runs off.
ploiuiu ploiuiu Apr 30, 2016
I read it a few miss punctuation but everyone dies even me so no one is perfect but I love it it's so much clearer than before!
BittyBean BittyBean Mar 07
My mom doesn't buy it anymore because it's gone within hours