Jessica Elektra is kidnapped, and now she just can't stop swooning; Yummy vampires :3
@koolkatkake I've read it a third time and everything makes perfectly sense to me now. I'm glad I really COULD help you with my comments. :)
So, on to the next chapter!
@LiaAlica Hey thanks, and it's cool, you've been a GIANT help to me; I still cannot believe you're still doing this, it means a LOT to me and I really appreciate it a lot :))
I fixed it again, I'm hoping I got it right this time; Third time's the charm! :))
@LiaAlica Hey, It's cool, I asked for critism didn't I?
Anyway, you've helped me A LOT; I'm fixing it asap!
Don't forget that my comments underneath were just suggestions.
@Maddiesun97 His name is.. uhh... right there... hahaah Maddie xx
@XDVampireluvXD You have a LOVELY name :)
@AliceBlake Hahaha thankyou! :)
i love your story~ Jessica ( Yes i know the main character in your books name is Jessica but it seriously is my name) XD