My love means your Death

My love means your Death

9.1K Reads 210 Votes 8 Part Story
Madison By Ang3lDust Updated Jan 24, 2012

Sarcastic Rayne is sixteen years old, and doesn’t talk... but by choice. Because whenever she gets emotionally attached to someone, they die a mysterious death. She has resorted to the life of a mute... until the she meets the new kid.

Ang3lDust Ang3lDust Jan 29, 2012
@gummybearsinparadise Haha thank you so much[= I'm glad you like it![=
Ang3lDust Ang3lDust May 27, 2011
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked the story so far(: I think i will start seperating the speakers and such in my new additions. Thanks again(: 
007beanie 007beanie Apr 29, 2011
I think the plot is definately interesting, i agree with the person below that splitting up the paragraphs with different speakers on each line would help, but i like the story so far, keep up the good work =)
ObsessiveBookworm ObsessiveBookworm Feb 11, 2011
This is brilliant!! Sorry I took so long to get around to reading it x
FrozenHearts FrozenHearts Jan 31, 2011
Its different. I like it. If her grandpa's dead, how long could she possibly keep that going? Someone's going to look at his files and notice. Oh, I love your writing style but what you could consider is seperating people talking. That's just what I think. Moving on :)
Ang3lDust Ang3lDust Jan 24, 2011
@Mera2876: Alrightie, well i hope you like it! =] 
                              
                              Thanks for reading =)