Sarcastic Rayne is sixteen years old, and doesn’t talk... but by choice. Because whenever she gets emotionally attached to someone, they die a mysterious death. She has resorted to the life of a mute... until the she meets the new kid.
@gummybearsinparadise Haha thank you so much[= I'm glad you like it![=
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked the story so far(: I think i will start seperating the speakers and such in my new additions. Thanks again(:
I think the plot is definately interesting, i agree with the person below that splitting up the paragraphs with different speakers on each line would help, but i like the story so far, keep up the good work =)
This is brilliant!! Sorry I took so long to get around to reading it x
Its different. I like it. If her grandpa's dead, how long could she possibly keep that going? Someone's going to look at his files and notice. Oh, I love your writing style but what you could consider is seperating people talking. That's just what I think. Moving on :)
@Mera2876: Alrightie, well i hope you like it! =]
Thanks for reading =)