Abandoned

Abandoned

4.9K Reads 74 Votes 8 Part Story
Sanoma By Sam8Sarah Completed

Lilly has just gotten over the death of her mother, but not only did she die when she was giving birth to Lilly. But now Lilly's sister died in a house fire. Lilly's dad beats her and her crush is her only light! But when she finds out he doesn't like her, she is really upset! But to only make things worse her dad takes her for a ride, then leaves her.

zacharius zacharius Sep 21, 2013
I liked the story and u are pretty good at writing don't give up
sharingiscaring sharingiscaring Dec 24, 2011
Amazing. The part where she was talking about a fire was really intense. It's a different kind of story; GOOD JOB.
Sam8Sarah Sam8Sarah Jun 16, 2011
@HopeButtrum Yeah at school i kinda try to stear clear of gettin sent to the counciler again for "disterbig talk of dieng" and talking about suicide :)
Twilight860 Twilight860 Feb 03, 2011
Stop Sams a good writer nuthin needs to b done end of story poor lily
Here let me give you an offer. I'll spell-check it if you promise not to shank me ever again!
Sam8Sarah Sam8Sarah Dec 01, 2010
Oh,  you don't like violence...... yet you shank us with pencils........  ??