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seaofroses07 By seaofroses07 Completed

Imagine not being able to remember your family or friends. In fact, imagine not being able to remember your own name or anything about yourself!
Welcome to the life of Addison Pierce.

She enters Eaton Academy, the most prestigious academy in the world, only knowing three things. 

Her name, her age and that she can't trust anyone.

What happens when you add a boy with anger issues and an attitude to the equation? 


Something that Caiden Calimero is known for. 

Addison learns a lot about her friends and the ways of Eaton Academy, yet a lot of things happen behind closed doors.

The thing is, Addison has her own secrets, secrets that she doesn't even know about yet. 

But what was the best thing about not remembering who you were? 

You could be anyone you wanted to be.

Highest ranking: #212

I really like this opening and the way you write long paragraphs and then suddenly snap a short word for effect. It's beautiful :)
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                              -Melody Rain ♡ :)
Wow you really know how to set an atmosphere!  I'm so glad I picked this up!
That's very interesting prologue. While it does give away the memory issue, it's telling there is more to come considering the Academy. It's a little too long for a prologue according to me, but I'll give that to you since you had to accommodate a few too many elements.