Dying Embers  ✔

Dying Embers ✔

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A Roy By anupamarc Completed

WATTPAD FEATURED STORY A drone is found on Mars on the same day Zoe Blackwell starts her new career, hoping the past will leave her alone. But an innocent interview with a quirky centenarian leads to a string of outrageous events, and life spins fast out of control.

The book that takes you from New York City to Egyptian ruins. Alien technology, ancient talisman, a secret society and a debutant reporter. Their paths merge for an explosive result ending in a heart stopping car chase. 

Two love interests - childhood friend, Zachary and an intriguing online stranger, Jaxon - which one can she trust?

"Absolutely loved it. Stephen Spielberg would enjoy producing this on screen. Great job" - SLindgren

"If you do think of publishing it, I'm so going to buy them." - Nintelle

"This is truly beautiful... I don't want the book to end... This book will make an excellent Sci-fi/suspense movie... I'm already imagining on the big screen..." - Amyroyale

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SallyMason1 SallyMason1 Jul 18, 2017
Set the heading apart from the rest of the paragraph (maybe even center it) and start the next paragraph with "The news." I think this will bring the message across and gives a better hook.
SallyMason1 SallyMason1 Jul 18, 2017
"answer" is an echo word to the sentence before. "drifts through the receiver" maybe?
Kristiekc Kristiekc Jun 19, 2017
How about( he exhales loudly) or he exhales long and loud, sounds less sticky than a long breath because a long exhale is a breath, something like that?
Looks like one of those books i will stay glued to till the end 😎
- - Nov 05, 2017
 #wpc 
                              I really like your vivid descriptions! It definitely isn't over the top but it's enough to pull readers in! I also like the beginning, where the first sentence states "Drone found on Mars, suspected alien origin." It already raises a few questions and sets the stage for some mystery. Good job!
SallyMason1 SallyMason1 Jul 13, 2017
I sent you a PM and eager to get started :)
                              
                              BTW, love the current cover. Fits the story so well