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Dying Embers

Dying Embers

12K Reads 1.3K Votes 59 Part Story
A Roy By anupamarc Completed

A drone is found on Mars on the same day Zoe Blackwell starts her new career, hoping the past will leave her alone. But an innocent interview with a quirky centenarian leads to a string of outrageous events, and life spins fast out of control.

The book that takes you from New York City to Egyptian ruins. Alien technology, ancient talisman, a secret society and a debutant reporter. Their paths merge for an explosive result ending in a heart stopping car chase. 

Two love interests - childhood friend, Zachary and an intriguing online stranger, Jaxon - which one can she trust?

Kristiekc Kristiekc May 01
No idea how I missed the vote on this chapter, but rectified . Most likely happened during a glitch ah well :D
Kristiekc Kristiekc Jun 19
Her fingers ( leave out a blur of colour ) it gives the impression that all her fingers are different colours (  I know you mean her nails )... just go with blur maybe.
Love this! Very well written.  If I had to describe it in one word: Gripping! :)
Kristiekc Kristiekc Jun 19
How about( he exhales loudly) or he exhales long and loud, sounds less sticky than a long breath because a long exhale is a breath, something like that?
Kristiekc Kristiekc Jun 19
Ohh another one I missed the vote on good :D I got it this time.
Kristiekc Kristiekc Jun 19
flooding ( it ) rather than ( the room) with a flourescent light