Because I Love You

Because I Love You

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Jedediah B. By Aaron_Ledgers Updated a day ago

(Highest Ranking - #8 in Fantasy!!!!! ❤) -- 
  
Reality cannot be changed and things that have already happened are set in stone. Like everyone else, that's what seventeen-year-old Xaphile Heseroph believed before HIS reality turned upside down. Three months after his girlfriend was killed in a shooting, he took his own life and woke up as an almost monstrous-looking mirror image of himself on a parallel world. 
  
But how can a boy who wants to die AGAIN find redemption in the face of pure hatred? And who the hell is the ruthless girl that looks and sounds so much like his late girlfriend that he mistook one for the other?
  
Why do they have the same name?
  
Is this his own, personal hell?
              
Or is it a second chance?
                
And if it is a second chance... does he even want to take it?
                
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I'm confused as to what is gained by using ellipses over commas.
This is so intriguing and you've left me hungry for more! Great start, man!
Andicook Andicook Feb 10
Great prologue. It's hooked me immediately. Very dramatic. I'm not sure why it's in italics, though.
MidnightSky987 MidnightSky987 3 days ago
Wow, this was a great beginning! I feel bad for the poor girl. There are no mistakes in grammar or spelling, and I loved how you described everything. Well done! 😀
As you know I've loved this book from the beginning also it's nice to see the new prologue. It still has the same power as the original but also its own extra flare.
Elvenglory Elvenglory Feb 02
Oh my gosh, Ive been seeing the notifications for this prologue and so I finally read it.... and I love it!!!