Love at first sight

Love at first sight

1.2K Reads 23 Votes 5 Part Story
SkyKeeper By SkyKeeper Updated Dec 28, 2010

Lucia was always nicknamed 'Love Expert' in her school, but her identity was only known among girls and not guys. She never believes love at first sight, but it was proved wrong when she first met her classmate, Shawn who was a big star in the school and Shawn knows her indentity which puzzled her. She was always bullied by Shawn's fangirl group and she gets upset a lot because of him. Will she ever get Shawn? will she ever get her happily ever after? read to find out!

SkyKeeper SkyKeeper Dec 01, 2010
@Pinkholder Oh!okay!I'll try changing the dialogue style. :) thanks for telling me ;u;
StarryDust97 StarryDust97 Nov 22, 2010
It's great and funny and yeah! It's great! Oh and from my experience, mostly boy's hair is fluffy. XD
snow_angel21 snow_angel21 Nov 22, 2010
Your stories are not that bad, it's just the dialogue that needs a little bit of help cause it's hard to see who's talking and sooner or later i become confuse. But overall god job, keep it up! :)
StarryDust97 StarryDust97 Nov 08, 2010
@alyssayhy  me too aly! I so wanted to laugh a lot. I know where did you get the love expert part. From me, right?