You've finally met Dan Howell, or danisnotonfire, and his best friend Phil. You're happy, Phil's happy, but Dan doesn't seem to be happy. That's when you find out his most long kept, and well kept secrets, that he only tells people he trusts.
So far this is as good as louder! :D but pls make them longer ;(
It's a bit fast progressing. How did they know her name as well? Try and build up the characters a bit more, and slower. Other than that, the actual writing is good!