You've finally met Dan Howell, or danisnotonfire, and his best friend Phil. You're happy, Phil's happy, but Dan doesn't seem to be happy. That's when you find out his most long kept, and well kept secrets, that he only tells people he trusts.
So far this is as good as louder! :D but pls make them longer ;(
It's a bit fast progressing. How did they know her name as well? Try and build up the characters a bit more, and slower. Other than that, the actual writing is good!
If I saw Dan and Phil walking by my apartment building idk whether I'd run out to them or pass out
It's not his fault I cry when I watch YouTube rewind for the first time when it comes out and when I watch Shane Dawson's short films