Bubblegum Pop [ETMale/HumanFemale] 1st Draft

Bubblegum Pop [ETMale/HumanFemale] 1st Draft

6.9K Reads 313 Votes 7 Part Story
gossamersilverglow By gossamersilverglow Updated Oct 07

[A short 18+ story] Killian Masters is haphephobic (the fear of touching). So why doesn't he freak out when  the new girl in town, Sunshine Powers,  touches him?

Razza_ Razza_ Apr 09
Sounds interesting! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!  🙌
SheenaAliy SheenaAliy Apr 15
It was interesting and a fun read. I like the quirkiness of the characters.
judajudaas judajudaas Apr 10
The names itself are unique and I enjoyed the descriptions you did. It's a unique take on a man and a woman as you described that he isn't human. 
                              
                              It's interesting and I'm excited to read more!
- - Apr 13
I really enjoy your writing style, your pace and description are well done, the characters are intriguing, and I like the chemistry they have with one another so far. Aside from some minor grammatical tweaks, very well done.
SheenaAliy SheenaAliy Apr 15
It's funny how he was angry with himself for wanting someone who he thinks is weird.