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24.5K Reads 2.6K Votes 19 Part Story
jay By almosts Updated Mar 09

"Nobody can tell this story. Nobody but me."
  
  
  
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  When Aaron McGannon struts into school with a gun and a plan, nobody is prepared. Not his boyfriend, not his sister, and certainly not the souls that hang in the balance. From then on-maybe even before-nothing is certain. 
      Nothing, except the resounding declaration that skids across the asphalt of his mind; there will be blood.
  
  
  [ NO. 13 || 19.5.16 ]

This already seems amazing! I'm excited to keep reading further! :)
balladrys balladrys Dec 27, 2016
this is the third time reading this and i'm still already shook i luv myself
hypocrisies hypocrisies Jan 04
this is the most real sh*t i've read all day. totally gonna finish this at some point !!!
balladrys balladrys Dec 27, 2016
what u just wrote shows that u are the intellectual i aspire to be
I'm loving the writing here so far. Very descriptive and carefully built up suspense. I love how you leave little vague hints of what might have lead up to this moment but don't clarify anything so that readers will keep on reading. 
                              I'm really enjoying this!
As someone who has watched performances done from the point of the view of a shooter, seen documentaries, and read works on shootings, I'm very interested to see how this whole story will play out. Your writing is stunning, so that's definitely a huge bonus! I'm excited for this, Jay 💗