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~*Angelic Vixen*~

~*Angelic Vixen*~

964 Reads 37 Votes 20 Part Story
Midnight_Lily By Midnight_Lily Completed

Valeriana Romarri is a seductive, manipulative woman. A vampire of an original family from the 1500s, over time she has been known as an emotionless beast, never known how to truly feel, no humanity. She kills for pain and suffering and enjoys the game of cat and mouse, predator and prey. She's on a quest of revenge, with the proper sources she hopes she can find out who murdered her family. While all this going on she's caught in a love triangle, between a human, beings she sees as nothing but pawns for her benefit and entertainment, and another creature of the night. Will she ever obtain humanity or continue being a heartless, lifeless monster? Will she ever learn how to truly feel, love and do selfless actions for another?

DizzyHurricane DizzyHurricane Jun 26, 2013
This is an amazing beginning. I love the way you describe her feelings towards the man, and the personality that you created really works with the vampire theme.
Midnight_Lily Midnight_Lily Sep 22, 2012
@wonelson I knew I forgot something! Lol thank you and thanks for the vote. If u decide to read the rest of the story I hope u enjoy it
WendyWrites WendyWrites Sep 22, 2012
Great start! 
                              If I may make one suggestion -- perhaps you could provide a little more description about the inside of the club. What kind of music? How many bodies? Light, dark, crowded, sweaty, etc. 
                              Otherwise a very enjoyable read. You have my vote!
Sa5MuelB Sa5MuelB May 14, 2012
This is a great story. I like the description, it is very amazing and I think it has great potential...voted and its in the library
Midnight_Lily Midnight_Lily Apr 17, 2012
@SevenRoses Thank you,, I was just hoping I did the perspective of a vampire fairly decent.
SevenRoses SevenRoses Apr 17, 2012
Very nice prologue, exquisite details. You're a good author.