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Demon & Satine (Collab w/ DestinysTragedy

Demon & Satine (Collab w/ DestinysTragedy

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For now..Ginger (the nickname I prefer) By Madame_Immortal Updated Nov 23, 2010

As if there was already enough problems in Satine's life.Starting from her adoption issues to her dysfunctional "family." Now she meets a mysterious someone who makes her life a living Hell and also something to worth living for. Is it his glasses or his personality that sends her soaring? Will she be able to live with the stress of a brooding demon on her back or will it push her over the edge? Read more to find out.  Filled with Love. Seduction. Secrets. Betrayel. And Promises...

Tropicall Tropicall Mar 24, 2011
Whoa. There are these big blocks of text, and it's really hard to read. Maybe you could split them up into multiple paragraphs? Also, every time a new character speaks, you start a new line. But, I really like your descriptions. Good job :D
Sunaru Sunaru Nov 25, 2010
Demons are awesome :D !!! I'm definitely interested in reading more. The way you wrote it sucked me into the story :) 
ForbiddenSoul ForbiddenSoul Nov 25, 2010
I enjoyed reading your story :D just a little complex at the end but very good, what happens next? i wanna read more! xD keep going coz I want to know :3