Demetri's story

Demetri's story

96.3K Reads 1.6K Votes 27 Part Story
Secretly a vampire By vampireowl Completed

Emily has just turned 20 and she and all her friends are going on a trip that will literally CHANGE their lives!

  • alec
  • aro
  • blood
  • buddies
  • caius
  • cats
  • clavin
  • cullens
  • demetri
  • die
  • drinking
  • edward
  • emily
  • explanation
  • fleur
  • flowers
  • friends
  • gift
  • honeymoon
  • jane
  • kiss
  • klein
  • ledge
  • love
  • marcus
  • mate
  • mum
  • pain
  • power
  • powers
  • run
  • scared
  • sharing
  • slow
  • snow
  • sun
  • two
  • vampires
  • volturi
  • wedding
  • wife
YarinMaximoff YarinMaximoff Aug 11, 2016
Demetri is me turning 16 XD 
                              *half-aßed fake excitement* Yay......whoopdie-fricking-doo *continues on with life*
writing_is_my_love writing_is_my_love Oct 23, 2011
@vampireowl Your welcome, and I will. later. Working on music for one of my stories right now.
vampireowl vampireowl Oct 23, 2011
@AndySixxLover123 thanks its great advice and please comment more and read on. thank u :) <3 xxxxxxxxx
writing_is_my_love writing_is_my_love Oct 23, 2011
You write well. You need to work on your dialogue. For one thing you need double quotations ( " ) not singular ones. Also, you need endmark for dialogue. And I suggest if you have the person have visions, put them in italics. But, all in all, you did very well.
vampireowl vampireowl Oct 23, 2011
please comment i want to know what you think! please don't keep me in suspence. :) xxx