Ivy is just an ordinary wizard. Suddenly, she meets both Snape and Voldemort, disguised as another average wizard, on the same day. When love sparks, then both wizards collide and fight till death, leaving Ivy to watch....
I like your style, story and interpretation of Snape however - please check your spelling/grammar!!!
e.g. "have e of them"
"That's James made Lily do all the time"
AND quotation marks which are missing in a lot of places througout the piece.
how could this not have more votes/comments, or reads nonetheless? your writing is amazing actually and that's pretty rare on this site. I like it, short and straight to the point but at the same time not feeling rushed