The Secret She's Hiding

The Secret She's Hiding

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emerald24 By emerald24 Updated Jul 20, 2014

A young girl loses everything at the age of 9. Her family, home, friends, happiness. They sent her to live with a man who abuses her and inflicts pain on her everyday. She shows a smile everyday at school and hides all of her cuts, bruises, burns, and scars. No one is able to see the pain that's hidden beneath her or hear her cries for help. That's the secret she's hiding.

Can one huge risk make a difference? Or just be a huge mistake? Is it true someone could actually be loved for once?

MajidPervaiz MajidPervaiz May 28, 2014
Starting is nice... For me i m intended to know.. Why that happened to girl..
emerald24 emerald24 Jun 28, 2011
@CookiMonster @supernaturalmom  Yeah it's a dream. I'm sorry it's hard to understand, should I change it to where it won't be so confusing or should I just stick with the confusion? 
supernaturalmom supernaturalmom Jun 24, 2011
It was a dream of stuff thats happened right? Thats why it jumped from one thing to another.
                              peace out
                              S.N.Mom
CookiMonster CookiMonster Jun 02, 2011
I'm sorry, but i'm a bit confused. Was this all a flash back? Because nick wasn't there and the house was gone? I'm actually really confused, but i'll keepp reading to maybe understand more. :)
emerald24 emerald24 Jan 11, 2011
@x0XjamieeX0x Thank you soo much! I get really happy when people say my writing is good bc I love to write and I never know if its any good or not. Thank u for taking the time to read it! :D
RamirezCindy RamirezCindy Dec 29, 2010
@emerald24 Nope. Well, I didn't notice any mistakes at all. :D