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100% Perfect

100% Perfect

68.9K Reads 577 Votes 18 Part Story
Audrey Warters By Audrey_Warters Completed

Bailey. Supposed to be perfect, a science experiment with DNA. Perfect. Not Superhuman. But when things seemingly go wrong and powers begin to develop within her, Bailey is forced to from everything and everyone she knows. Now, when a twist of fate brings her and her sibling together, the fight of a lifetime begins.

Losing_Patience Losing_Patience Jan 23, 2011
Wow, That was awesome! I would buy this, no joke, kinda creepy though, like if this actually happened. Good job :)
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JordanJohnMendez JordanJohnMendez Jan 21, 2011
I actually know someone named Stephanie Davidson :P it's kinda close to your character's name. Anyways, good storyline!
diamondgal29 diamondgal29 Jan 15, 2011
i like the idea a lot. but just as a grammar suggestion, you should make new paragraphs after every line of dialogue, it will make the story easier to follow. other than that, very nice (:
BlueInnk BlueInnk Dec 29, 2010
OMG Spice kinda freaked me out. How Dren (aka Nerd backwards) looked so scary, my 7 year old sister had nightmares about her! lol.
Audrey_Warters Audrey_Warters Dec 29, 2010
@RockStar212, I was talking to one of my best friends and she wanted to read my journal, so I let her. She pointed out the idea of this story and said I should actually write it, so i did:) It's also kind of inspired by the movie Splice
RockStar212 RockStar212 Dec 29, 2010
Wow that's really good! Did you get inspired to write that or was it your own idea?