humanstuck! gamzee x reader [FINISHED!]

humanstuck! gamzee x reader [FINISHED!]

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dontsugarcoat By dontsugarcoat Completed

a new guy at work. seems legit. little did you know that this one person at this one moment could take you on the most important journey of your young and stressful life

The capitalization sucks and it makes me want to stop reading it, but the story is SOOO GOOD! I CAN'T STOP READING IT EVEN IF I WANTED TO :OO
The punctuation is bad, you need to fix it. You also need to separate your paragraphs.
                              That is all of the criticism I need to tell you though, as you have good grammar and a good story!
                              I will continue reading -w-
That my kinda day, go to school, come home(I don't have a job) do hw, eat ramen, AND GO TO BED
Lol Raman noodles. XD at school be like:
                              
                              Friend:Soul your eating RAW MEN how is it
                              
                              Me/Soul:GREAT!
UndefinedSpirit UndefinedSpirit Oct 23, 2015
Quite the first impression. "crazy ass juggalo".
                              Oh, and for those of you who were wondering:
                              emancipated
                              ɪˈmansɪpeɪtɪd/
                              adjective
                              free from legal, social, or political restrictions; liberated.
                              "emancipated young women"
                              
                              from google definitions
                              even though that doesnt really help much
thingies thingies Aug 14, 2015
Did you know that ramen noodles don't digest in your stomach?