a new guy at work. seems legit. little did you know that this one person at this one moment could take you on the most important journey of your young and stressful life
If your feeling down, and your cat just drowned, eat some Raman noodles
O I forgot this was GaMzEe and not karlos I'm like HE DOESNT TALK HE IS MUTE! And sewed his mouth shut :0)
The capitalization sucks and it makes me want to stop reading it, but the story is SOOO GOOD! I CAN'T STOP READING IT EVEN IF I WANTED TO :OO
The punctuation is bad, you need to fix it. You also need to separate your paragraphs.
That is all of the criticism I need to tell you though, as you have good grammar and a good story!
I will continue reading -w-
That my kinda day, go to school, come home(I don't have a job) do hw, eat ramen, AND GO TO BED
Lol Raman noodles. XD at school be like:
Friend:Soul your eating RAW MEN how is it