Never Make A Promise

Never Make A Promise

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Allise By allise_K Completed

Hayley Davidson was taken away from her father by her mother when she was five years old. He promised she would see him again, but she never did. Five years after that, she witnessed a horrible act committed by someone she trusted. Someone who promised to take care of her. 
At seventeen, she finds it hard to trust anyone anymore, which makes it hard for her to have a relationship. That is, until Damon Smith shows up. Damon is the average good looking, arrogant jerk who knows he can have any girl he wants and finds it annoying. But when Hayley doesn't budge, he finds himself falling for her. As he grows closer, Hayley finds herself falling for him too. But will she be able to push aside her past and trust him? And she realizes that he's keeping a secret himself. Can she figure out what it is?

feline5 feline5 Nov 17, 2013
I think Broken Promises would have been a good title, u don't hv to, just a suggestion
NoNaxx NoNaxx Sep 21, 2013
It's 1:30am right now and instead of sleeping I am hooked to this... So amazing
khamalia khamalia May 21, 2012
I haunt read yet....... BUT...... By comments story sounds really GOODIE!!!!!!!!!!!!
simplyhysterical simplyhysterical Oct 03, 2011
hahaha I was reading this and I thought how does a 5 year old know what a booster seat is? Haha random thought. I can be so stupid sometimes. Ignore me lol
roxyloves2345 roxyloves2345 Apr 13, 2011
omg it awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u should get ti published some day!!<3
cannmundy cannmundy Nov 21, 2010
Great job wanna read more so post soon Well I have been waiting for a new story from you but this is not what I expected I was thinking of a love story although this could be one its just starting but I like it its deep an you feel for hayley an her family problems