Bullied ( Jacob Sartourius Fanfic )

Bullied ( Jacob Sartourius Fanfic )

25.1K Reads 702 Votes 32 Part Story
kristixmarie By kristixmarie Completed

When hannah keeps getting bullied bye jacob she starts getting feels will jacob have feeling for her to are no?

  • depression
  • fangirl
  • jacob
  • jacobsartourius
  • love
Okay here we go.
                              1. If you are going to talk about self harm then add a warning. Kids are sensitive.
                              2. You have run-on sentences everywhere 
                              3. Your plot is way too fast and hard to keep up with.
                              4. I have no idea what is going on throughout this chapter. 
                              5. Nouns need capital letters
bxsic_bxtch bxsic_bxtch Apr 08, 2017
So she cut herself just because her parents left for business and Jacob just pointed her out and called her a bitch? I don't think you know the concept of self harm I get called worse on a daily basis and I don't cut myself over it
ShericeSaedy ShericeSaedy Jan 29, 2017
Why are all the girls in these stories always have to be Caucasian not being 
                              Racists or anything but girls in other races are pretty too......SMFH😔😔😒
nashpineeda nashpineeda Aug 14, 2016
I'm sorry but plz check your words I can't really understand some😞 of it but I want to😃
jsonmyfeet123 jsonmyfeet123 Jan 17, 2017
Words that are spelled wrong: neighbor,months,leaving,since, alarm .
                              I don't even understand what's happening in the third paragraph .
                              Not being rude,just correcting