Francis was young and free, and the world was his oyster. When his travels lead him to a town with a series of kidnappings, cattle theft and stories about witches, he couldn't help but investigate.
I meant I loved the line "constantly traveling but never arriving". That makes considerably more sense, doesn't it?? Haha(:
Continue! Please carry on!!!! I love it!!!!
Good for you for trying something out, and I think you should carry on. This is a great start for this story and it can become even better as you progress! Go you!!!