The King's Bride

The King's Bride

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Elleon Rosk By elleonrosk Completed

Princess Amatak was to marry King Jerodfan, who was rumor as a tyrant. On the way to Jerodfan's castle, the princess forced her maid, Bakani, to substitute her role. Arose from her overwhelm status, Bakani knew nothing about being a princess or politic, but only good at her job as a maid. At least she won't be doing any more chores around the castle! She'll be respected like a queen since she is marrying to the powerful king! At least that's what she thought! However, will Jerodfan allow a traitor's daughter live in his castle freely or will his cold heart melt by his innocent beautiful wife?


Set in a fictional country in middle east around 500 BCE. Everything is a made up story. This story is all mine. 

cover made by one of my reader, @gadaffilicious Check out her books. 

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  • drama
  • fiction
  • historical
  • king
  • prince
  • princess
  • romance
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Nickme1 Nickme1 Oct 09
I would recommend that you don't use the word "advised" in this sentence, because the word itself means offering suggestions to the best course of action. Rather replace the word with "warned".
No suspence....its like a story book instead of a novel...its so plain...there is need for improvement..
Nickme1 Nickme1 Oct 09
You are talking about one specific language (English) so languages should actually be language.
Rithushree Rithushree Nov 24, 2016
grammatical mistakes dont spoil a good plot if the writer is confident....... ncy start.
imthemessiah imthemessiah Nov 26, 2016
Shoutout to you for having a colored girl for a cover of a story that's based in the Middle East 🙌🏽🙌🏽 someone finally gets it right 😂
ShaniaHettiarachi ShaniaHettiarachi Nov 16, 2016
Haha. English is my first language, the only one I have confidence in and the one I lack the most confidence in. I feel ya! love the story line. I did not see that plot twist with the maid.