daddys girl moves to small town and the towns gang leader wants her and only her.
A little piece of advice, you should put quotation marks when there's a dialogue otherwise it becomes confusing
Plz chuck some Q marks when talking coz it gets confusing like this for eg. " hey how's it going?" He asked " good you" see? But love the book
Can u try putting "" when they talk lol I'm just getting a little confused but it's great so far :) :>
Could you possibly put the things they are saying in quotes?