The Last Hour

The Last Hour

15.9K Reads 198 Votes 2 Part Story
Jeremy Maughan By cptnjm Completed

John's Wife has died from a car crash. To escape the trauma and his life he has traveled to alaska. His adventures lead him on an unexpected journey of loss and discovery. 

Come join John as he seeks answers to his feelings from an unknown benefactor, accessed only through a found radio.

He's wife was dead ryt? How cum shez alive now? 
                              Someone care to explain please? 
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Anyway this was amazing😊
BrockZabel BrockZabel May 26
I enjoyed it. I felt like the ending could've been made better. Overall I think it's really good
The description of the glacier really brings the scene to life
Rubi_reads Rubi_reads May 12, 2016
That was completely unexpected, but it makes sense. The journey on the ice was symbolic, also the voice from the radio. I loved the detailed description in the outdoor setting, and then the shift in the story took my breath away. Nice work!
Rubi_reads Rubi_reads May 12, 2016
You picked a very nice setting for the story. And the reader doesn't have to wait very long for the story to actually begin. Sad one, but heartwarming at the same time. Moving to the next part now, but I'll click on that vote button first. ^^)
LediaDarrow LediaDarrow May 14, 2016
Wonderful story well written wasn't expecting the end. Won't spoil it worth the short time it took to read.