The Last Hour

The Last Hour

16K Reads 212 Votes 2 Part Story
Jeremy Maughan By cptnjm Completed

John's Wife has died from a car crash. To escape the trauma and his life he has traveled to alaska. His adventures lead him on an unexpected journey of loss and discovery. 

Come join John as he seeks answers to his feelings from an unknown benefactor, accessed only through a found radio.

  • adventure
  • mindgames
  • short
  • twist
  • wattys2016
Heatheranno Heatheranno Oct 17
Great opening chapter.  Your descriptions are detailed and vivid and John is interesting and engaging.
                              I used to live in Alaska, and I thought you captured the glacier and the ice beautifully!
The description of the glacier really brings the scene to life
Rubi_reads Rubi_reads May 12, 2016
You picked a very nice setting for the story. And the reader doesn't have to wait very long for the story to actually begin. Sad one, but heartwarming at the same time. Moving to the next part now, but I'll click on that vote button first. ^^)
jbmajzner jbmajzner Mar 11, 2016
I like Zoe's character a lot :) Your descriptions are amazing. There were a few typos but overall this was very well written. Well done :)
Vroomfondel42 Vroomfondel42 Mar 11, 2016
I wonder how that radio got where it was. Great first part. You got me. I want to keep reading.
survivalofemilyhunt survivalofemilyhunt May 04, 2016
I was in Denali last year! Great start, looking forward to reading more!