A Cinderella Spray

A Cinderella Spray

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melbastien By melbastien Completed

Have you ever wondered what it was like to sit at the popular’s table at lunchtime, being envied instead of envying people?

Well, meet Chloe. She’s an average in the small New England town Ketowa. She walks in the hallways of Jefferson High with the same people she’s been to school with since kindergarden or so. 

Yet, she’s invisible. 

At lunchtime, Chloe can only daydream of what life is like at the Populars' table, the most sought clique of school, which includes the dreamy Ethan Myers. 

Everything changes the day Chloe finds an odd spray bottle that literally changes her appearance, giving her the outside beauty that makes guys look at and girls envy. After that, life seems perfect for her new alter ego she’s called Faith. She starts hanging with the Populars. Even Ethan seems to take interest in her.

 But nothing comes without its price and Chloe is about to find out. Now she has until the spring dance to break the spell before it becomes permanent. In the world of false friendship, backstabbing, betrayals and faked image that is Jefferson High, will Chloe find the one person to see her true self before she completely fades away?


**** First prize winner of the Best Story Awards 2014 in Romance *****

Written_or_Spoken Written_or_Spoken Feb 04, 2015
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loudlydreamer loudlydreamer Jul 18, 2014
This story seems really interesting.  btw. That Christina and Jennifer girl, they both sound really mean  anyways, here I go
opulent_ opulent_ Jan 13, 2014
Interesting. Your characters have a variety of personalities. Intriguing and captivating.
                              
                              Keep up the good work!
- - Sep 25, 2013
While reading the summary, all I could hear was Homer Simpson narrating the whole thing...that's weird right? Anyway, great chapter! I like the characterisations and I think it has a lot of potential :D
opulent_ opulent_ Sep 24, 2013
I really like the introduction! It hooks me in straight away. I would recommend shortening your summary and splitting it up into several paragraphs, it makes it easier and clearer to read.
                              
                              Good job! Keep it up!
Ashy17 Ashy17 Sep 24, 2013
For your first story this is amazing! I love your descriptions and I am a huge fan of fairytales so I will definitely keep reading this one! Keep up the good work